Review number # 6 of week July 24, 2014

Hi Intuey

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed!Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Story of Love

First Impression: You did a great job with the restrictions Marci placed.

What I liked: The second stanza made me laugh... especially ho ho ho and then no no no.

What needs your attention: If you center your poem it makes it more visually stimulating to the reader and shows that you are confident in your writing which you have every reason to be.

Favorite Parts: Share a smile and spread the love for your wishes are answered, from up above. I thought that said a lot more than just the holiday. People would be so much happier if they focused on smiling and sharing love instead of fighting.

Overall Impression: I thought this was very enjoyable to read. You did a great job with the prompt.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn