Review number # 7 of week July 24-30, 2014

Hi Keaton

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Falling Abyss

First Impression: Your poem came up in the random review, I am impressed.

What I liked: Living opulence and ignoring the populace are compelling images. It says a lot of the character daring to be himself

What needs your attention: Nothing, I think visually it is just as compelling as the words. The visual presentation says you are confident and proud of your work.

Favorite Parts: That he rose up to be remembered. All of us dream of that in our lives, it is the sign of a life worth living.

Overall Impression: A thought provoking well written poem that brings many images to mind as one reads. Excellent job Keaton.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




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