Hi there, You wished to be reviewed, and here I am. I enjoyed reading this poem, and I like the simplicity. A flower does have inner strength, and you've expressed it well in your own way. The second line of the second stanza "Is as strong as a tower is tall" can be corrected as: "Is as strong as a tower". The last two lines look a bit odd, you might try to rephrase them in some way. Overall, it was an enjoyable poem. Keep writing! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
|