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Hi there,
You wished to be reviewed, and here I am. I enjoyed reading this poem, and I like the simplicity. A flower does have inner strength, and you've expressed it well in your own way.

The second line of the second stanza "Is as strong as a tower is tall" can be corrected as: "Is as strong as a tower".

The last two lines look a bit odd, you might try to rephrase them in some way. Overall, it was an enjoyable poem.
Keep writing!


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