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Hi, amy-Has a great future ahead

This is a Simply Positive Review! *Pencil*

Thank you for the visits to my portfolio.
I wanted return at least one review for you, now. *Cat*


*Vignette4* I like your philosophy on reviewing, here at WDC. You have customized the approach to reviews, the types of reviews given for items such as peotry and articles as opposed to the style when dealing with short stories.

*Bulletr* You do a fine job of explaining the value of creating a character that is memorable and pulls the reader into the story.

*Bulletg* All of your pointers are solid and show how the characters, plot and dialogue are experienced through the eyes of the reader.


Great comments about reviewing, that really jumped out for me (and I agree with your observations) are as follows:


*Check3* "The plot has to make sense. The characters have to have a reason for doing what they do. I usually look at if the events in the story make sense and comment on this."

*Check5* "Your description should make the world described in the story real to the reader until they feel they are in the story with the characters."

*Checkb* "When I review Poetry I do it a bit differently. I believe that tone and rhyme are the most important things in poetry."

*Checkr* "As for essays and articles. I look at the overall presentation. Was it logical and coherent."


*Poseyv* Kudos on your articulation of review style.



Observations


Below I've highlighted some spots that are either typos or a little grammatical misstep. They are easily fixed in an edit.

"I joined Writers.com because ... " [Writing]

"I have since grew as a reviewer and created my own style." [grown]

"I poem is written to invoke an emotional response from the reader. Tone used is what brings that out." [A]

*Note0* I suggest skipping a couple spaces between paragraphs, so they stand out clearly and make it easier for the reader.


Otherwise, this was a strong point by point essay of how you approach reviewing items, here on WDC. *Flago*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch






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