Hi there, Bobby Lou Stevenson! This is a Simply Positive Review. I enjoyed how you took a Biblical story and added humor to the mix. What some people don't understand, is that just about any genre can have a level of comedy woven into it. I love it when someone shows a clever and creative spin on a story, bringing not only more attention to a particular moral of a story but lets the reader absorb it in a humorous way. I think it makes the story that more memorable! Observstion "Having been imprisoned as he was, Jonah learned his lesson to never again temp the will of God." [tempt] Well done and I will be highlighting this on the upcoming Comedy Newsletter. Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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