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Hi there, Bobby Lou Stevenson!
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Knob*

*Mugw* I enjoyed how you took a Biblical story and added humor to the mix.


*Puzzle1* What some people don't understand, is that just about any genre can have a level of comedy woven into it. I love it when someone shows a clever and creative spin on a story, bringing not only more attention to a particular moral of a story but lets the reader absorb it in a humorous way.


I think it makes the story that more memorable! *Tools*


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"Having been imprisoned as he was, Jonah learned his lesson to never again temp the will of God." [tempt]

Well done and I will be highlighting this on the upcoming Comedy Newsletter. *Compass*


Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch


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