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Head Games  [E]
The job seemed easy for the money offered; almost too easy.
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Head Games  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, 🌕 HuntersMoon
This is a Simply positive Review! *Glass2*

Okay, I'm liking the mixture of mythology and humor, with two bumbling burglars, boasting about their ill-gotten booty. This is another genre that is so fertile for humor. I love to find hidden gems like these that take the dark and mysterious and bring a touch of humor to it. *Equalizer*

*Umbrellav* The pace was smooth, quick and kept the reader's interest. I wondered what was going to befall these brothers. It was a satisfying ending, because, let's face it, you take your chances when getting involved in a crime.

*Dialog* The dialogue worked for these partners in crime and their relative, relativity of course, of being brothers.

*Gold* Mysterious treasure, the attempted get-away with a sense of pride and self-satisfaction; then all darkness broke loose from the item emitting a glow, enjoyable. Warning, if there's a glow, let it go! *Laugh*

Observation

"noting its rough exterior."

*Check2* I had fun reading this. I got a chuckle picturing these two, so I'm highlighting it this week's Comedy Newsletter. *Bigsmile*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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