Review number # of 4 week August 7-13, 2014

Hi Dana,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Unlikely Beginnings

First Impression: Hmm, where is this going? There are a lot of fun things to do with rope and bondage is she going in that direction.

What I liked: How Stephen had to reassure himself he was not gay. It made me laugh. Why is it so important to label everything. Why can't people just go with the feeling, experience it? Life is about learning and you can't do that if you are always hung up with labels.

What needs your attention: After lunch, he realized that his new belt had a major design flaw. The knot had tightened while he during the day, and now, in the bathroom, he couldn’t get it unknotted. He cursed under his breath while his fingers worked at the rope to no avail.
Read the sentence the knot had tightened while he....... what during the day?

Favorite Parts: Trying to decide if he should wait until Keith left the room but necessity overcame shyness. Although, my husband says it is hard to take a leak when fully erect. Stephen giving into the experience made a good conclusion to a quickie.

Overall Impression: Amusing read, though I have done a lot more fun things with rope than wearing it as a belt. But that's a story for another day. Good job, Dana.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .