Review number # 5 of week August 7-13, 2014

Hi Norb, yay it is me again!

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive. and 30 day Survivalist Camp

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Somebody Please Let Her Know

First Impression: Poetry and Music, there is so much to this man I had no idea. I feel like I am meeting him for the first time instead of a year ago.

What I liked: Initially, the author told us of no panic in either the man or the woman's light.

What needs your attention: Nothing, other than the same thing, you and I never agree on centering you work proudly.

Favorite Parts: When the man realizes that he has stronger feelings for her than she does for him and it dawns on him what will they talk about? He is still holding on to his dream and hopes some one will let her know what she is missing. I agree it is very difficult to be in a relationship/friendship when one person's feelings have changed and the other hasn't. I know for me it was easier to walk away than see him everyday.

Overall Impression: I am wondering if it is song with a guitar? I think a guitar would be really pretty. Another excellent written piece, Norb.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .