Review number # 6 of week August 7-13, 2014

Hi Ann,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive. and 30 Day Survivalist Camp

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Pearl Ring and Our Friendship

First Impression: Pearls and Friendship is what drew me to your lovely tribute to Tris.

What I liked: The pearl isn't created instantly, but little by little until it is perfect. like our friendship. I never thought of a friendship like that, what a beautiful way to describe how one grows over time into lasting joyful experience.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: The variety of pearls and stones is significant. This line is so powerfully understated with its significance in a long relationship. We are all unique and bring different characteristics into a relationship that make those relationships blossom and grow over the years. I truly love how you chose the circle of the ring is complete and perfect to demonstrate the bond that has lasted over 40 years.

Overall Impression: I think Tris is blessed to have received such a beautiful tribute. The poem is beautiful read out loud and says a lot about the author and ability to see what really matters in life. Friendships are priceless, thank you for sharing Tris and yours.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .