Review number # 8 of week August 7-13, 2014

Hi Finn,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Moon Night

First Impression: What it lacks for length is made up in the powerful imagery before death

What I liked: How the moon hypnotized the earth and its inhabitants. I am guilty of getting lost myself when I am staring at the moon. Maybe I should be more cautious if the moon is indeed hypnotizing unsuspecting people with its potent gaze.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: I glimpsed the others silently treading their fate. This interpretation could apply in anyone's life as they struggle to find their way. Some of us just can't give in to our fate and fight it tooth and nail. While other realize that resistance only makes it worse. When the time comes for each of I hope that it is simply that easily to slip beneath the waves or in our sleep.

Overall Impression:

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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