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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

This review is for the 30 Day Blogging Challenge Scavenger Hunt.

*Music1*My Thoughts:

This is a small flash fiction story that gives us a taste of dark humor.

*Music2* My Favorite Part:

I loved the punchline of this short story. I can feel for the woman because my cooking is also horrible. Unlike her, I make my husband cook instead since he's far better at it than I am.

*Music1*My Suggestions:

The only suggestion I'd have is I want to see the wife's response to that smart remark.

*Music2* Final Thoughts:

Writing an entire story in flash fiction is difficult. There is a hard balance between what's going on and giving your characters life. I think you captured them well. Great Job. Thank you for sharing!

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