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12/13 It's where I am from where I'm from.
by Fivesixer
Review by Noyoki
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Fivesixer ,

This review was done for the 30 Day Blogging Challenge Scavenger Hunt.

*Music1*My Thoughts:

This poem explores Norb's life. We learn of his passion, and it flows through all the lines of this work.

*Music2* My Favorite Part:

> If the ink still bleeds. This is a vivid line, one I think many writers will relate to.

> then I can blow up these walls around me with a good beat that has a surrounding similar to the love of a family... I love this line. It takes two very different things, and draws a unique parallel between them. The sound of music, and the love of family. Very powerful.

> I like the layout of this poem. It feels semi-chaotic, and mirrors life that way.

> I can't wait for it to be my turn. My Thanksgiving. I like how you drew on the holiday, yet gave it a new meaning and life.

> The last eight lines were strong. People often look at love as a soft emotion, but you gave it power.

*Music1*My Suggestions:

This was a great poem, I have no suggestions.

*Music2* Final Thoughts:

This was a perfect example of free form poetry. You were able to explore the shape of the poem and let the truths of your life flow free. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you,

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