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 Coincidence?  [18+]
A grief stricken man at the brink....
by Steven Alexander
Review of Coincidence?  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, Steven Alexander
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Home*


*Flagw* My heart felt the tug, the literal pulling into this poor man's heart and mind. His spirit was lost, he was in despair.

*Dropb* The thing with a great loss is, we who have suffered it can actually understand the emotions and feelings of guilt and the haunting of our conscious minds that hint at what could have been done differently so as to prevent the great loss that happened at that time.

Difficult subject matter, drastic ways to rid oneself of those hauntings, yet a rescue at just the right moment, erases all those negative thoughts.
*Rainbowl**Rain**Rainbowr*


*Burstb* I loved the happy ending. But for a visit on a certain day at a specific time, this poor soul would not be enjoying his new life of love and joy. Thus, he realized that there is a purpose for the wait even though the suffering was great.


*Note5* I don't see the former Non-E word, (suicide) in your brief description, if you'd like me to change it back to "E" let me know and I will do that for you. I would love to highlight this in the WDC Spiritual Newsletter. I will be the guest editor for the August 27, edition.

So please let me know if you'd like the Non-E removed from the Title/Intro rating. *Smile*

Well done! Your story is very inspirational and proves that where there is life, there is hope. *Angel*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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