A Positive Rhythm [E] A poem about the mental side of sports: positive rhythm and positive thinking. |
Hi Tim Chiu, Summerwind here reviewing your poetry A Positive Rhythm.
Title: I think the title is very appropriate for the poem style Over all impression: Positively speaking, my first impression of your poem is the musical rhythm that flowed through out your whole poem. It made me stop and think about what you were saying, about positive thinking can over come any negativity, if you persist with mental toughness and determination. What I liked: I liked the style of the poem, it almost rolls off your tongue as you speak it out loud. It definitely has a musical lilt to it and even though it is quite sophisticated it has originality. This is only my opinion, what I received from the author's poetry and my perspective of what it means to me. Favorite lines: So gear up with juices flowing And go forth with a saavy wit; For positive thinking is knowing There's value in showing grit. Summary: A well written unique sophisticated style poem, with rhythm and a musical lilt. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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