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 Longing  [E]
Longing to be seen as something more in the eyes of others...
by ViciousWords
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello ViciousWords, Summerwind reviewing your free style prose Longing.

 Longing  (E)
Longing to be seen as something more in the eyes of others...
#2004360 by ViciousWords


Title: The title says it all, but it doesn't say what you are longing for, so it leaves the reader wondering what its about.

Over all impression: Wow! This free style poetry cam across to me as a declaration, bold with authority behind every word written screaming to be taken seriously. I hear an inner voice inside the writer expressing feelings of how they want things in life associated with relationships to be in this poetry.

Favorite lines;

Longing to be seen...
...as a natural normal human being.

Summary: Strong declaration of how the author feels about life concerning things related to relationships
I enjoyed this unique bold demonstration of free style poetry.

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