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Hello Andrew, Summerwind here reviewing your Haiku by random pick.

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Title: The title is so unusual, it can mean so many different things so it draws the reader in to want to know more.

Over all impression: A message told in three short lines of a Haiku, expressing loving someone even to the end of the last rains that fall and dry rivers. To me it means until the end of everything.

Summary: In three short lines the author has expressed loyalty of loving someone until the end of time. Right to the point.

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