Hello Kings, Summerwind here reviewing your lyrics My Sweetest Thoughts.

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Lyrics: My Sweetest Thoughts  (E) Lyrics I wrote about my wife Betty Jo, 39 years ago. I still call her Frecks. #129606 by Kings

Title: The title is what drew me in it was mysterious and I wanted to know what are your sweetest thoughts.

Over all impression: The lyrics flow well and they definitely have a musical lilt to them. Your rhyming is spot on.
I love your vivid color imagery in your lyrics of your wife. The song is delightful and reading it I could tell how much you loved your wife when you first saw her and still do. I also like the old fashioned way you expressed yourself, instead of some of the cookie cutter way the new writers write lyrics.

Favorite lines:
My sweetest thoughts are of my wife Frecks,
Who won my heart with those angel specks.
Beautiful long red hair and Irish green eyes,
A ranging temper she can no longer disguise.


Summary: A delightful old fashioned love song with a great rhythm and vivid descriptive lyrics.


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