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*Burstv* A great way to capture emotion, this wonderfully written piece was powerful and full of energy. The only way I could see to bring this energy tighter would be to eliminate some of the spacing between lines. This was written in another program and copied over, which when this is done, extra empty space tends to appear between the lines. This extra space detracts from the poem in that it allows the reader's attention to wander and this helps the poem to lose power.


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Not many authors, or readers, give much thought to placement or alignment, when it comes to poetry. It is my thought that something as simple as where or how you place a poem on the page, can add to its imagery. Poetry is up to the interpretation of the reader. What a poet writes, and the message a reader gets isn't always the same, especially when using metaphors. That being said, aligning a poem to the left of a page may imply unification; all is right in the world. Centering an item so that all the lines are askew, based upon the character count, can have the meaning of chaos and turmoil in life or emotion. Though keep in mind, this is just my personal feelings on the subject, and not all will agree with this. Though, it does give one something to consider.


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