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Reflections  [E]
This is a rewrite of what i considered a weak story. Tell me if i plugged the holes :)
by Cheri Annemos
Review of Reflections  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Cheri Annemos

This is review #3 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

*Burstb* You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit.

I am stopping in your port today because it has been ages it seems since I last did a review for you my friend. Where does the time go?


I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.


*Burstv* One of the first things that got a big *Thumbsup* from me was that this was a writing assignment and you took the time to include the assignment so that others were aware of the parameters placed upon the writing.

*Burstp*This is a well written piece on dreams and how they sometimes get lost. This short tale was an adventure in reminiscing and seeing how we got to where we are now, and knowing it was time to move on. A super story that brings to life a house that is falling apart and puts it on a tapestry for the reader to see for themselves the story before them.

*Burstg* I only noticed one small grammar issue. Other than that, all else appeared to be in order:
~ The house did look all of its 74 years.


*Burstb*Overall this was a good story that I enjoyed reading.

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