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 Ideas for a blank page   [18+]
Thoughts and ideas that pop up when you sit down with your pen.
by Alex Parkson
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Alex Parkson

This is review #5 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

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*Burstv* Though this is listed as incomplete, it is superb for a short story. This has all of the elements needed for the beginning of a great novel, or as a short mystery scene. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation error. My attention was riveted to the screen the whole time, and I enjoyed what I read. I felt compelled to read on, had there been more to read.





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