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Review of Memories  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Steven Alexander
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Pencil*


*Lightning* Well, this may be succinct, but you pretty much nailed it. *Smile*


*Fleurdelis* Those that we love, do make an impression that is lasting in our lives, long after they have passed from this world.

We think about them at certain times because something we do or say reminds us about them. It is said that "All it takes is one person to remember you after your death and you are immortal." I believe it is a Greek saying, and I may be paraphrasing it, but it is a very beautiful thought. *Buttonrewind*


Suggestion:

*Thought* You could use this as an introduction to a "book" of stories related to the loved ones who have passed on and left behind a little piece of them within your heart. I think that would be a beautiful idea and give this small paragraph vines and flowers to grow from its roots.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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