Review number # 3 of week August 14-20, 2014

Hi Alex,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Time in the Snow

First Impression: Interesting story, a very nice surprise that it was about a family of dragons.

What I liked: The beautiful descriptions of winter, yes, the cold and the biting wind make an impression on your body when you are outside trudging in it. I felt like I was trudging right along with him.

What needs your attention: Nothing, that I saw.

Favorite Parts: The homecoming of course, when the family is reunited. The excitement of the boy seeing his Dad and bursting to greet him first. You did an excellent job of portraying of the parents wanting to snuggle in each others embrace but the child does not want to let go either. Clearly, they loved each other by the intimate bantering that went over the little boy's head. I have shared many of those moments and it sounds to me like you have as well.

Overall Impression: I found it a very delightful story to read. I was surprised as I read that it was about a family of dragons. I am glad I discovered your port, I shall return again.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .