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 Memories of Christmas Past  [13+]
This was a perfect morning for me. Do you have Christmas memories as good?
by J. A. Buxton
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello. J.A. Buxton, Summerwind here reviewing your short story by random review.

Title: The title is very enticing to the reader, it draws you in and you want to find out about the Christmas Past.

Overall Impression: Wow! You took me on a journey with you. I felt as if you and I hopped into an hourglass and turned it back reliving your Christmas Past. You told your story with vivid imagery and descriptive sentences. Such as, The room seemed filled with the pine smell of our tree standing over in the far corner. Days before, we had spent the evening trimming it with both fancy and homemade decoration. You made me think back to my childhood, when I spent Christmas with my girl friend's family because my family didn't believe in Christmas. You brought warm memories of my friend Donna and I decorating her tree, things I hardly think about anymore.

Summary: A beautiful childhood story , well written with warm memories of the author's Past Christmas!

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