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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Beach*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Watch* This is such a lovely tribute to your father's memory. I know the feeling of loss and missing someone so much, you do things like cooking something that they loved. You can feel their spirit surrounding you as you do this and know they are whispering in your ear, add this or you forgot that. It's a beautiful thing to experience. I lost my mother last year, so I know of the hurt.

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"and I can't breath" [breathe]

"where you really here?" [Were]

"because I can feel you?"
This is a statement, so you don't need a question mark at the end, just a period.

*Burstr* You are so right when you say, "for nothing ever dies
really..." because they are with us always in our hearts and minds and we feel their spirit. *Angel*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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