Review number # 4 of week August 14-20, 2014

Hi Aundria,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Life of Silver

First Impression: Wow, I have read others commenting on your poetry skills and now I personally have the opportunity. You are a very talented poet.

What I liked: The stanza about helping them add new dimensions and layers to what they show so proudly. It made me think of a Mom gently helping her child blossom to her/his full potential. I never thought about silver has being a nurturer to the other colors until I read this poem.

What needs your attention: Nothing, I definitely agree with the First Place Award from The Muse Masters Poetry Contest.

Favorite Parts: The extension of the colors of summer stanza. I love the images of colors that come to mind that sparkle and dance with the light. Oh wait, I love the silver touch to snow image makes me think of the new fallen snow. I felt the single line with the lonely existence of silver emphasized the stanzas before and after. It made you appreciate what you had read prior and then think more about the lines after. You have created so many beautiful images in each stanza that I just simply cannot choose.

Overall Impression: The poem as a whole flows beautifully read out loud. I am in awe of such incredible poetry.
I wish I had visited sooner. Each stanza, line build upon on each other creating a powerful tribute to the understated color of Silver.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




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