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Plot and Content: This was an elegant analysis of death, I like your writing style. This was a short poem, but you really packed a punch and expressed the life and death of the title character in the poem. Despite only seeing her after her death as the poem begins, we get the feeling that she lived a full life.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind.

What I liked: I like the way you worded the poem, and the font you used, it really added to the presentation and composition.