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 Dark Passion  [18+]
I wrote this for the love of my life too.
by very thankful
Review of Dark Passion  
Review by Riverd0g
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Plot and Content: I know you're female, but I'm male and I'm submissive, so I can relate to this. I enjoyed this poem.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind.

What I liked: I liked the way you wrote about your partner's dark passions, and how you wanted to give in to that passion. I like the thirst you described, and the way you wanted to worship your partner.


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