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Hello shaara

This little poem about a snowflake put a smile on my face -- especially with the better/wetter rhyme which I love. Your use of rhyming couplets gives the poem great pace and rhythm.

I won't give the ending away but I thought it was a nice touch.

I found this a real pleasure to read.

Congratulations on having it featured in the poetry newsletter.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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