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Given: Aug 27, 2014 at 4:48pm
Length: 619 Characters |
614 w/o WritingML
I love Haikus, even though I think they should be in groups for a longer story. lol It's a great challenge to fit a complete mental picture in such a tiny poem with such few words.
I like the first line, sets the stage for the rest quite nicely and simply.
The second line was totally new to me. I hadn't read one like that with the snow and I like it's originality.
The last line surprised me. I was thinking it was going to be the old standby of the snow's 'kiss' and it wasn't! Tales-what tales is the snow whispering in your ear? Childhood memories? Intriguing.
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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