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 Flower of Hope  [E]
Writer's Cramp prompt: Quintilla...theme snowdrops/snowflake.
by Cubby
Review of Flower of Hope  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really like your FYI you included! I've never heard of that legend. Now I'm going to have to google the snowdrop and flower of hope to see what it looks like. Thanks.

I like how you do the wrap around lines that still rhyme. I"ve said it before, but I am envious of that. Also, the way you rhymed slope, hope and elope. Nicely done. The elope especially. You made it fit and it wasn't the 'old pat' stuff. Good for you!

Eve's bare garden slope--nice imagery. I'm impressed.
Thanks so much for sharing.
love, LinnAnn

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