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 Thankful on Labor Day  [E]
About enjoying a nice Labor Day but having a great boss at work - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower2* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed and there are no suggestions to make that I feel would improve the poem. *Flower2*

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*Star* MY POINT OF VIEW: You did a spectacular job of relaying what Labor Day is all about. Employers should be there for their employees when asked for assistance, and employees relied on to provide their bosses with quality performance. To make it short, employers and employees should work as a team. The first two stanzas sum that up, and the last one the joy of the holiday. *Star*

Sherri

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