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 My Chains  [E]
A free verse poem.
by Survivor48
Review of My Chains  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Survivor48 ! *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a sensational job of expressing the strength it takes to battle objects standing in your path to obtain freedom. I liked all of the stanzas, but the last one sums up the entire poem perfectly. *Note1*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" 

Sherri


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