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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were found, and I cannot think of anything to improve the poem. It is written from the heart. *Questionb*

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*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a superb job in relaying how we must find the way out of a bleak path by ourselves. No one can provide answers or guidance other than God. We have to have the will to battle obstacles that we might come across. You relay that well. *Star*

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