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*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were noticed. There are no suggestions for improvement to be offered. *Questiong*

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*Hourglass* MY THOUGHTS: This poem is heartbreaking. Self-criticism and lack of faith that things will get better are poured out in every stanza except the last, where you seem to provide a glimmer of hope. Keep writing! *Hourglass*

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Sherri

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