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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of that could possibly improve this emotional poem. *Flower1*

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*Exclaim* WHAT I THOUGHT: I loved this poem! You did a remarkable job of expressing that a childlike side is within even a mature adult. Responsibility is crucial, yet we all need to find time for the happier things in life as well, which is relayed superbly in the poem. *Exclaim*

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