Hello there Lisa Noe ,

I came here for a good read, and this attracted me. Here's what I feel about your writing. Please note that I am a writer like you, and can only give suggestions.

Title: The unusual name of the disease caught my eye.

Language and Layout: I have enjoyed this biographical account written in a bit of formal language, without directly using first person. The words used are not so difficult, and the item is laid out in a very neat way.

Errors: None noticed.

What I liked: I really salute this lady. She went through such difficult times, yet she never gave up. I can relate to this, as certain health conditions will also prevent me from having a child.

Keep Creating!




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