Hi again jasonb,
This is my second review for you. Here's what I think about your poem:

Title: Just a four letter word, yet it's so strong!

What I like most: I love the way you compare love with a gentle breeze. You've used many other nice imagery throughout the poem. You've given some nice advice in the last five lines.

Layout: This one might look better if placed at the center.

Overall: Enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!







My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .