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*Frog* A great poem illustrating and delivering sound advice on how to live life through the eyes of this poet. This is honorable and sage advice given.


*Frog*Personally I thought the title was too long and rather liked a shortened version: The ABC's For Life
To me, this leaves more mystery and intrigue for the reader and is part of the lure to draw the reader in.

*Frog* I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon. The only thing I found detracting from the poem was the one text symbol for a winky face. INSTEAD of text lingo I would have used WDC emoticon *Wink*. To me, this would have had more impact. Just my personal opinion though.

*Frog*Overall a great poem creating a tapestry of wisdom to live by.



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