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Hello, gardengirl
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Quill*

I am also judging your entry in the Bard's Hall Contest. Thank you so much for entering!

*Gingerbread* I had fun reading your entry. You brought the "ant" world alive with humor, distinct character traits and working for the queen while enjoying some treats.

The ants on the bicycle scenario, was a hoot. *Clip*

*Web1* You incorporated all of the prompt words. *Web2* I know, those very scary words that kept people at arms length until almost the last few minutes of the contest. *Laugh*

Congratulations on being the first entry. You go girl!*Checkerboard*

*Thought2* One wish is that the prompt words would have been highlighted. I know, we didn't ask for that, so it's a moot point. I'm the dyslexic one, so I reread the story another time or two to catch all the words. But they are there!

Good job, kiddo! And good luck with the contest. *Thumbsup*

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