This is a beautiful descriptive poem. So many instances of simile and metaphor. I've never read a poem about a poet's world, but it was a pleasure to read.

This is a free style poem, but it was not without structure. Your many rhymes linked the lines together, and I loved how you even used some internal rhyme. It flowed very well as a whole, and the story was clear.

The only suggestions I have is that you go back and check for changes in tense and typos. I found quite a few, but that is understandable as you have only done one edit. A little fine-toothed combing would really benefit the poem.

These were my favorite lines because of the awesome imagery:

...The pen our sword
Paper our battle field...

Write on!

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