Hello Lynda Miller
This is a Simply Positive Review!

I'm also reviewing your item as a judge for the Bard's Hall contest. Thank you for entering!

Your story was fun and filled with imagery.

I love the use of a future time looking back into the past, and describing all of those favorite things. Clever concept!

Observations


"this is Plant Brat coming to you live" [planet]

"The one with they wooden stick would stand pretty far back because he didn't liked being hit with that hard leather ball."

I think you meant to mention "hotdogs" in the paragraph, but forgot to do so, when describe driving in a Chevy to a drive-up window for a milkshake ... and perhaps a hot dog?

That was the only prompt word I couldn't find, but otherwise, this was a fun and quite imaginative read!

Good luck with the contest -- and again, thank you for entering!

Until next time--write on!


WW



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .