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Hi there, I found your piece in "read a newbie", and thought I'd take a look.
I love reading fantasy :)

overall, this is an interesting prologue. I can't wait to read more. Not many suggestions on this piece, regarding spelling and grammar or conventions

I do have a question, because you call this the 7 daughters of the sea, and the 8 daughters of aronia. Is there a difference?

Good job and keep writing!

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