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First Thoughts

I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  as part of "WDC 14th Birthday Sr. Mod. Challenge" . The first paragraph hooked me with The Lord's creative angel messengers. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked

This is my favorite phrase because it states a truth that many of us forget.
every historical accomplishment represents a new beginning for somebody

Suggestions For Improvement

This phrase, And, I have a, is missing an opening quotation mark. I suggest placing a quotation mare before And.

Final Thoughts

I enjoyed reading this inspiring story because it caused me to think about how may accomplishments contribute to humanity's accomplishments. Write on.

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