I am reviewing "Airplane Mode"  for "WDC 14th Birthday Sr. Mod. Challenge" . The speaker is telling the story rather then showing the actions. The main character is intriguing and sympathetic, he is someone that many people can relate to.


I like the main character because he knows he has problems and attempts to solve them by increasing his knowledge.

I also like the way this story ended because it suggested that it may be a romance or a relationship story.


I suggest showing the events through the action rather then telling the reader what is happening.


This character and story have a great deal of potential. Write on.

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