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 | Girl troubles  [E] Archie is having girlfriend trouble and tries to seek advice from his friend Kendell.  |
| (4.0)| A Review For You in connection with "Simply Positive Review Forum " [E] Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !   BlueMoon This is review #5 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum "  You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit. I found this item by clicking on the Things To Do & Read tab on the left of the screen and selected Read a Newbie. This was one of the items on the page, and the title lured me in. I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it. An interesting chat between two friends as one tries to sort out what had happened earlier in the day. This is a dialogue piece that was easy to follow. One suggestion for this would have been to put the names in bold and one of the characters in italics to set apart the characters and make for an easier reading. One minor technical issue noticed:~ "said it helpful for" missing a word to have complete grammatical fluid movement and literal sense. "said it was helpful for" would be my suggestion. Overall an interesting dialogue that was fairly easy to read and comprehend.
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You responded to this review 09/03/2014 @ 5:45pm EDT