Review number # 4 of week August 28- Sept. 3, 2014

Hi Rozebud,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Last Dance

First Impression: Oh, my. Those moments never come again. The bond between a father and daughter is so special.

What I liked: How simple and direct the dance unfolded between the father and daughter. It was beautifully written.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is awesome.

Favorite Parts: He placed his head against her fragrant auburn hair. The image of the father holding his daughter close, reminiscing about all the times he inhaled her delightful scent in the past. That moment in their lives is precious.

Overall Impression: Delightful! I am glad I stopped to read.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .