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Nice Signature Made For Me by b.meridith!

What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* I wanted to read an entry in "The Writer's Cramp and yours are always fabulous!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I was reminded of certain leadership issues that loom in international dealings.

The herrings are not doing what they should, are they?

This is very clever!

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I like this early part:

"The birds, in formation, were fourteen beaks deep
(The fifteenth, the youngest, had fallen asleep).
Ricardo, their leader, stood strong at the V.
Why he was their leader was easy to see!"

I was glad to see the Pelicans had such a dynamic leader. Maybe the herrings will learn by example.

Nice work!

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read.

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Ta Ta until we meet again....

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