Still Waiting [E] where you go belong, either waiting you're love or forgetting her to end up all? |
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First impressions: This is a simple and heartfelt poem. My thoughts: I don't know much about reviewing poems, so I won't comment on the technicalities of the poem. I could feel the pain of losing the beloved through the verses of the poem. The difficult question of whether to move on or wait makes one an insomniac. He relives and re-experiences the moments spent with her. He feels empty and and lonely. The question of whether to let go or hold on to the love is resolved in the end i.e. the poet chooses to wait. My favourite lines: I am longing for you, my dear Your presence, your lovely smile I liked these lines as they are very expressive In my lifetime I'll use to remember Keeping it as our simple souvenir. This is a sweet way of cherishing the memory Final thoughts: I liked this poem. Though it is short and simple, it contains the deep feeling of longing, sorrow and heart break. Soh My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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