Hello, Ann. Here is review of "Free as a pelican" for 14th wdc birthday sr mod challenge. What dragged me into your story was not so much the title, as the short description you had underneath. It suggested a lot of fun. And it was funny, indeed. The first half of the story was a bit serious, with a resignation and some big plans for an unknown dream waiting to come true... Nothing betrayed what the second half would bring. Right after the middle, it became more humorous, the image of the pelicans gathered around to have a meeting was my favorite point. Another great image was the one where Martha was walking and a line of pelicans was following her. It reminded me of a mother goose with her little ones following suit. Very cute image. I really enjoyed your story. Keep writing. Best wishes. Susan ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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