Review number # 3 of week Sept. 4-10th, 2014

HiPhoenix

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Stars

First Impression: Very encouraging to the reader.

What I liked: You may not be a star in space but you are star of earth.

What needs your attention: I think you should consider centering your poem. To me it reflects the authors confidence in his writing as it springs boldly from the page. It is also nice to see the title of the poem above the work in the main body.

Favorite Parts: The encouragement the author makes to the reader about not choosing another life or a different set of eyes. You are brighter than any star. So many of us long to hear positive feedback and this poem as you read it out loud makes you feel good inside.

Overall Impression: Very well written, clearly positive and encouraging to everyone regardless of their passion or interest. Excellent job, Phoenix!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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